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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (8/10) |
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Reviewer:
nosympathy
(Edit) |
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Feb 23, 2011 |
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I too enjoyed the way they turned the tables on her and started her punishments. Looking forward to many more chapters. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
susankarl
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Jan 12, 2011 |
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like the idea of her being taken unawares....look forward to hearing her scream (7/10)
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- Replied by:
tjlewis132
(Edit) (Jan 15, 2011)
- susankarl... Thanks for taking the time to review my tale. Hopefully her screams in the future will bump the score up a tad. Anyway, regardless, I do appreciate reviews... Thanks again... J LEWIS
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Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Jan 9, 2011 |
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Its much better than "Boarding School" but the slow build up doesn't work for me, it should have started earlier, when she arrived smartly dressed etc, but that said it was a good read and I wanted to get straight on and read part two so that in my view sets it apart 8/10 (8/10)
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- Replied by:
CortezFan
(Edit) (Jan 11, 2011)
- Great story. Can't believe that it took me so long to discover J Lewis. Can't wait for more to this story, and am enjoying others.
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tjlewis132
(Edit) (Jan 15, 2011)
- Major... Excuse me but are you reviewing the right story here 'ol buddy? Appreciate the imput but I've got problems discerning my storyline with your interpretation. The second paragraph jumps right into the interrogation and torture of not one, even two, but three women.(Followed almost immediately with the stark discription of a forth inmate's treatment. Also, the only mention of her clothing is a robe. Again thanks for your imput that's always appreciated, but maybe a re-read would be appropriate... J LEWIS
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tjlewis132
(Edit) (Jan 15, 2011)
- Cortezfan... Thanks for the compliment. Looks like there will be a few additions to this tale. Sorry about so many codes missing on others, the site crashed and deleted numerous codes, ratings, etc a couple times now. (If you do take the time to scan over a few more of my stories, they tend to follow a similar agenda, similar codes... Thanks again... J LEWIS
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