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A Modern Human Dairy and Meat Farm
Author: Pick Up Man
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(Added on Apr 16, 2002)
(This month 93110 readers) (Total 146241 readers) |
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Set in future, animal live all dead, humans used as milk and meat source, human cattle used for sex and cook outs. |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
kicksnf
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Jun 17, 2011 |
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SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nemz
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Jan 8, 2008 |
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The story is interesting and well thought out. I would suggest a bit more detail, but overall there are no large issues with the story. The problem is that the grammar is horrendous. Honestly. I highly suggest you yourself rewrite this or ask someone else to do it for you. (3/10)
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pet252r
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Mar 10, 2007 |
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i guess just not my thing...dosent mean it was bad just not for me.... (5/10)
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dnagirl
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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It got me thinking (7/10)
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Avralivia
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Jul 13, 2006 |
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good ideas - just not well written enough to be enjoyable - sorry (2/10)
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La Toya
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Apr 27, 2005 |
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What is a paragraph? (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
quixote327
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Mar 8, 2004 |
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OK plot, but too fast and with too many grammer problems to be worth your time. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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just doesn't work (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 18, 2003 |
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It needs work in the grammar department. Also, way too many large, endlessly rolling paragraphs that just get the eyes too dizzy. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
agp_millie
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Dec 6, 2002 |
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Shame about the large number of spelling and grammar errors. Should use a spell checker. Altho' erotic, i couldn't FEEL 'in' the story. If i was being BBQ'd, then would prefer more use in Dairy 1st. ... but, that's just me. 6/10 for content, 2/10 spelling etc. which made it difficult to enjoy at it's best. (smile)
agp_millie@yahoo.co.uk (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
BlackRad!sh
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Aug 28, 2002 |
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It's a rarely used concept, but the format and structure (as you could probably tell by the description) made my eyes cross. I could only get through the first chapter, and that by skimming. My advice to Mr. PUM is to have a brainstorming session with other people and have them put it together. (2/10)
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