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Saturday
Author: cbt42
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(Added on Dec 6, 2010)
(This month 10919 readers) (Total 16730 readers) |
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A sub visits her Dom one Saturday - a true story |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (4/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (6/10) |
Lowest
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| Reviewer:
sneaks
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Jul 17, 2012 |
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as easy as that. sweetness. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Dec 18, 2010 |
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I have seen shopping lists with more literary flair.
If it is indeed true then I hope the poor girl gets some help soon because she has some severe problems, but of coures its just a dodgy infantile fantasy. 2/10 (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 7, 2010 |
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Story is written in short sentences which come across as someone's shopping list made into a mantra.
On top of these short outbursts, the author manages to start 34 sentences with "I" in a 6kb text. That must be some kind of record.
"Saturday" could have been far more interesting and enjoyable should cbt42 have written a story about what happened. Now, the only thing he did was screw-up things by using this rap-o-clap style.
Better next time.
JJ (4/10)
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