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Saturday Morning Teen Capture
Author: Bad Dad
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(Added on Dec 6, 2010)
(This month 97053 readers) (Total 130957 readers) |
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Circumstances align, allowing me the chance to abduct a sweet middle school girl and abuse her tender young body for hours until I have no more use for her. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
LittleSlavegirl9
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May 28, 2011 |
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I honestly loved this story. I never comment on stories, I made an account just to comment on this one. It was rather rough but well written and well put. 10 stars hands down :) you should put out more! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Bad Dad
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2011)
- Very cool of you. Feel free to write me at baddadluvsteens at yahoo dot com
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Dec 11, 2010 |
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This story is pretty well written. Could use a bit of editing. The higher ratings include enjoying the story...which is difficult only because there actually are people like this. This realization detracts from the possible enjoyment (this isn't the author's fault, just the rating system.) Some snuff I can handle; this wasn't my cup of blood. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Bad Dad
(Edit) (Dec 13, 2010)
- Thanks for the review and I should have gone over it a few more times to clean up the editing. The story was just something that I came up with and felt like trying to write. Thanks for the read.
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| Reviewer:
Master T
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Dec 10, 2010 |
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grammatical errors, author claims the story is real... (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Bad Dad
(Edit) (Dec 11, 2010)
- Can we all stand up and cheer for pathetic reviewers? I never claimed the story is real, but I do claim that you're a douchebag.
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| Reviewer:
tjlewis132
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Dec 9, 2010 |
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Very well written. More then a bit harsh, even for me, but readers are forewarned. Personally not into snuff, or such young victims, but on the other hand, again excellently written with a good flow. I guess each has his tastes, and followers he wants to draw from. I'm sure you'll have yours on this site. All in all, a ten. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Bad Dad
(Edit) (Dec 10, 2010)
- Thanks for taking the time to review, especially when it's a read a bit out of your comfort zone.
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| Reviewer:
biguysub
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Dec 8, 2010 |
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OUTSTANDING! For F/fans of extreme fantasy; perversion and ultimate depravity, this is Truly
one Very Well written piece of erotica! The close attention to every [descriptive] detail of the story makes you feel as though you are right there, sharing in the scene!! KUDOS, Author! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Bad Dad
(Edit) (Dec 8, 2010)
- Thanks for the review. Didn't think anyone was ever going to say anything. Looking back there is some clean up I could do to help the flow, especially early on. Thanks for the Kudos, it was quite fun to write.
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