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Destruction
Author: ace091
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(Added on Dec 2, 2010)
(This month 78795 readers) (Total 100009 readers) |
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A slave is used by his new Mistress and her friend |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JerryH
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Dec 21, 2010 |
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Very enjoyable story so far. I wish you'd write more about each of the scenes, though. The action is great, but would be more enjoyable if you wrote more about each incident (how it felt, what you were thinking, the sounds, the feel, what the Mistress was doing while you were being abuse, etc.). Please keep going with the story. (8/10)
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slv4pleasure
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Dec 20, 2010 |
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Nice short piece, heavy duty action.
Great scenario. Would love to see you flesh it out more. (8/10)
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