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Melissa's Shameless Act
Author: Jake Olive
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(Added on Dec 1, 2010)
(This month 58876 readers) (Total 71310 readers) |
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A young wife with a desire for sexual adventure makes a bad decision and her activities are discovered by her neighbor. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 3, 2010 |
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Nice, but slightly overdone intro to what could become a good story.
Slightly overdone in the sense that Jake Olive seems to try a tad too hard to come across as a 'good' writer, but lacking the techincal skill to do so. To counterbalance this observation, I must add that Jake seems to be carved out of the right wood and that those technical aspects will be mastered along the way.
Anyway, the opener to "Melissa's Shameless Act" has made me curious as to where this will lead...
JJ (7/10)
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