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Last Rites
Author: Michelle Byssom
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(Added on Nov 13, 2010)
(This month 18840 readers) (Total 28239 readers) |
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Frances Villon can hardly believe her eyes as the young slavegirl slowly prepares herself for a terrible self-inflicted death in front of the audience. |
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| Reviewer:
Doc_Odd
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Jan 24, 2011 |
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The build-up was very well done. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Nov 13, 2010 |
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Very short eloquently written tale. A hard, fantasized reality. Sad too, because of what happens; especially the addendum where the girl speaks on the TV.
Will God indeed put some wrongs right? Afraid not.
I think the best proof that God doesn't exist is the presence of mankind. No God in his right mind would come up with such a species...
JJ (9/10)
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