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Sisterly Love
Author: ElementsOfLife
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(Added on Nov 13, 2010)
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A young Woman excited by her first College Party gets on the wrong side of her Twin Sister and her World gets turned upside down. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 11, 2012 |
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Another great story that is just begging to be continued & finished! It is a must read, but if it's continued...let's make it better & leave Paul out of it! The idea of this being a forced lesbian story with forced twin sister sex is just to delicious! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Nov 14, 2010 |
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i am afraid that nothing annoys me more than poor editing mistakes. Whilst i only discovered one it was a very silly mistake to make:-
"I stood there stunned not sure what to say as Natasha came storming up the stairs. Her eyes met mine for a brief second and I was met with an unfamiliar hostility. I was rooted to the spot and cowered back to my Room not wanting to start a confrontation with Natalie."
So is she Natasha or Natalie? To be honest Natalie is only only used once, so i assume this was some form of typo.
Normally i really like ElementsOfLife stories (i really like "Stacey's Job" and hope we get some more chapters soon). But although this story is well told with clear characterization and plenty of detail and action, i did not enjoy it very much.
This story is to far fetched for my liking (ok so "Stacey's Job" is pretty far fetched, but people do disappear). We have to believe that a college girl gets to humilate another girl and eventually takes her, her twin sister and a man prisoner while there were a number of party goers and a DJ present. It strikes me to be to much like a fantasy and the synopsis and category does not indicate that.
In my opinion (please remember this review is just my thoughts, i am sure others will disagree) this story would have been very good if right at the end we learn that this was all Lily or Natasha's dream. Thereby putting the whole story in the realms of fantasy.
Having said all that i look foreward to reading more chapters to see where this talented writer takes this story. (7/10)
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