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Potty Training
Author: Bloody Spankee
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(Added on Nov 9, 2010)
(This month 58456 readers) (Total 68106 readers) |
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A 22-year-old girl has been suffering night-time incontinence for years..... and now she has to be potty-trained! |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Nov 18, 2010 |
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Ridiculously short
As is my review (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Nov 15, 2010 |
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There's a lot of potential in these few lines, but can authors please refrain from posting tidbits of what should become a story?
It's only because I'm in a cheery mood that I accord this poor excuse a four score. Normally I should have given "Potty Training" zilch, nada, nothing, zero...
So, dear Bloody Spankee, get back to the drawing board and please present us with a 'real' story, instead of this what seems to be like a summary of the chapters that should make up the complete tale...
JJ (4/10)
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