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A Night With Minh
Author: Hooksforhands
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(Added on Nov 9, 2010)
(This month 67431 readers) (Total 81108 readers) |
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A killer lusts after his daughter\'s college roommate. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Service33470
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Mar 27, 2016 |
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I was excited reading about his fucking her dying body. (9/10)
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Mastersbitch
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Jan 14, 2011 |
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I enjoyed this story. It is written in such a way that you can understand the main characters, what they do, their background and current state of mind. Which is no easy task in a short story.
I would definately like some further chapters with different people :) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Michael247
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Nov 10, 2010 |
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Ah... what a waste.
*** There is always something about snuff stories that I've liked. It's not the killing though. Dead girls can't be constantly screwed and tormented. But there is something erotic however of knowing that there is no way out,and that there is only one way things are going to end. The total loss of her control over anything is what I enjoy.
*** A Night With Minh is a well written little tale, telling a simplistic yet totally believable little adventure of a serial killer who goes after a girl he knows. The plot is basic, and yet contains a sort of pathos that makes it easy to understand and sink yourself in. You feel as if you're right there, next to the perpetrator/narrator as Minh is raped and killed. There is an emotional content which comes across, not through specific "I felt" statements, but from the TONE the narrator speaks. That's the mark of a really good author.
*** Grammatically, the story was well constructed,with decent compound sentences, no discernible errors, and correct punctuation. That places it above at least half the stories posted here on the BDSM Library.
*** All in all, this was a nice little tale.
Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander (www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (9/10)
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