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Aztec Feastings
Author: Rotneb
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(Added on Nov 8, 2010)
(This month 72173 readers) (Total 82571 readers) |
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Human sacrifice was an important element in the ancient Aztec culture. This story is a modern version as Tanya and her friends are experiencing. The price for the losers in the competition to get a husband is that the losers will be sacrificed to the Aztec gods in the impressive old Chichen ltza area created by the Mayan. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
HuManiMal
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Dec 11, 2011 |
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Exceedingly good original story and concept, but it does have a little trouble getting some of the action across, not due to the authors lack of proper English. I think the problem is Tanya is too artificial. Except for the very end, I did not find much "life" in the main character. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Spitman
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Feb 8, 2011 |
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I'm delighted to see that Rotneb has overcome the problems with language in this story. It is beautifully expressed. What has not been lost is the unique pace that his stories have, progressing inexorably forward, with suspense and emotion, to a denoument that is as expected as it is unsurprising, but still opens up a new perspective that has itself elements of refreshing, elemental and erotic revelation. The story "The Woman who Rode Away" by D.H. Lawrence had a similar visceral theme and background, which is very tempting to erotic writers, including myself. One of my earliest stories on a similar erotic theme involved ceremonial impaling of women by Aztecs. (10/10)
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