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Elise's Need
Author: Jilli
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(Added on Apr 6, 2002)
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Elise meets a friend for coffee, but the afternoon soon takes an unexpected turn. Brad, her friend has been paying closer attention that she thinks, and he forcefully reveals the needs that she has kept locked away and reserved for private fantasy. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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crickette
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Aug 2, 2004 |
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Good story. I am a hopeless romantic so I love happy endings. I liked the fact that he knew what he wanted and went after it. Even though he was determined to get it, he knew she was the one who ultimately had the last word. She had to admit what he already knew and what deep down she knew herself. I also loved the way it started off slow, quickly picking up speed and ultimately climaxing. I look forward to more of your work. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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another sleeper, hope there is more to cum (9/10)
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julise
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Nov 16, 2003 |
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Extremely well written. I liked this very much. (9/10)
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Equalizer
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Sep 8, 2002 |
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A short story relating a sexual encounter is hardly original on this site. However this one, with background details and believable characterizations shows how it should be done. Generates some heat too! (9/10)
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Xodus
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Apr 27, 2002 |
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Very well written!
A little mild for me, but I really enjoyed reading it. (9/10)
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Andromeda
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Apr 15, 2002 |
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A wonderfully sympathetic exploration of the mind of a submissive. I liked this story very much! (10/10)
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RubbrSpatula
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Apr 8, 2002 |
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Full review here:
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/forums/showthread.php?s=51eecdd0a1326bfa09d81dbe39be63f9&threadid=21 (8/10)
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Ladyvet
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Apr 7, 2002 |
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are almost invariably autobiographic to some extent. This is an excellent first story! Elise is an interesting character. Both characters are well developed. The dialog is realistic. I find that especially noteworthy because I know how difficult it is to create. The action and excitement build well. The situation is believable, especially if one happens to be submissive. I look forward to Elise's further discoveries about herself and her needs. (9/10)
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Jonathan
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Apr 6, 2002 |
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This isn't my favorite type of story (an account of a single sexual encounter
between two people with little plot and tension in only one dimension), but this
one was so well written that I enjoyed it anyway. I liked the glimpses into
Elise's head and wish the same had been done for Brad. It would have been
nice to see how he arrived at his opinion of Elise (it is discussed briefly, but too
briefly), although it would be hard to do that gracefully in a first person story and
I agree with the author's choice of first person perspective.
Here's hoping the author will post more of her work and perhaps broaden her
scope to cover more complex situations. (8/10)
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