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Control Removal
Author: choice
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(Added on Oct 27, 2010)
(This month 123509 readers) (Total 146072 readers) |
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orifice has just been brought into a world. A world beneath the norm, one filled with dark desires. she is trapped in His place. A place where everything is run by Him. orifice\'s control over her very own body is slowly, cruelly torn away from her, as she succumbs to His sadistic demands. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
lbfm
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Oct 30, 2010 |
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Great start! I really do hope to see more. Writing is good as far as I can tell, and I like the story setting. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 28, 2010 |
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A nicely written piece which shows there's someone behind the desk who knows how to write.
Too short to make a conclusive decision, but I'll come back regulary to see if content has been added. For now, I'll settle for an eight rating.
JJ
Replied by submissiveforuse (Aug 26, 2010)
i will try not to disappoint you (: but this girl behind the desk can't write well enough.... she'll try and learn though (: (8/10)
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