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Final Tour
Author: Nickd
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(Added on Oct 12, 2010)
(This month 69953 readers) (Total 82562 readers) |
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Soldier, back in civilian life, walkS into the wrong night club and, by so doing, enters the final and most horrific part of his short life. |
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| Reviewer:
hb59
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Jun 14, 2011 |
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High quality discussion, and details about this poor slobs last days.
A total maso would get off on the pain and submission involved. The story is that good! A continuence would be wonderful!! (9/10)
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wistan
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Nov 28, 2010 |
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Excellent story. I love the randomness of it - that the guy just literally makes a wrong turn and BAM, he's in for it. I also like that the women aren't all the stereotypical gorgeous blonde models the plague internet erotica - it made things more realistic and believable. I'm looking forward to more!
One slight nag - there seems to be some sort of formatting issue with the second half of the file. It all shows up underlined for some reason...? (9/10)
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DungeonMaster6
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Oct 24, 2010 |
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Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Although I'm not really into scat, the rest looks promising. (8/10)
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iamwellard
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Oct 24, 2010 |
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Brilliant just what I wanted to read - looking forward to the next instalment where hopefully we get down to 'business' (8/10)
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sharp
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Oct 12, 2010 |
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This is a beautiful start. I would have liked younger mistresses but it is simply amazing! Please continue this story! Thank you! (10/10)
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