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Training Mom
Author: jethro jodhpur
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(Added on Oct 12, 2010)
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Divorcee dicovers that her son is taking over as the head of the family. Mom quickly learns that her position has changed to being his sex slave with all that entails. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 12, 2010 |
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When I was a kid --somewhere around the middle ages-- there was a persistent rumour going around that people were born from cauliflowers... Nowadays, it seems that --according to some lecherous minds-- females are born as giant tits from which, bit by bit, all other limbs sprout.
I mean, a 38DD rack is certainly a nice pair.
My grandfather used to say that everything more than a handfull was too much. Of course, the man sported grabbers the size of average coal shovels, so his comment was always accompanied with a grin, a wink and the raising of his shovels.
Anyway, it seems our man Lex has bought some new climbing gear with which he can tackle yonder outrageously high mountain peaks to satisfy his thirst for going over the top.
Usually, folks who are in a hurry to go over the top, fall off on the other side.
But Lex Ludite/Jethro Jodhpur (the other nom-de-plume momentarily escapes me) has a way of going over the top I rather appreciate. Because, while the narrative is overly outragous, the narrator most of the time keeps his cool while being sucked into the maelstrom.
Lex also is smart enough (most of the time) to choose mountains which have a small plateau on the other side of the top, so he doesn't go down like a ton of bricks once he went over it.
A lot of that has to do with skill. A skill to portray some characters who are all stone cold crazy, but act out their crazyness in an honest, self-evident way while following a certain self-imposed logic that fits the storyline. In fact, that logic *is* the storyline, or rather, a background setting around which the story seems to be woven.
Crazy? Sure. But a Lex/Jethro (still can't remember that other name) crazyness, which makes everything a rather fun read. Most of the time.
"Training Mom" has Lex's trademark bluntness and illogical logic all over it. It's a world that has most of the same rules we handle in 'our' world, but in Ludite's written world, anything goes, without rocking the boat in such a fashion you want to jump out. besides, Lex probably has the boat floating in shark infested waters, so better stay in and start rowing.
I liked "Training Mom". Because Lex's style grew on me. And I like the style. A lot could be said about his stories, but Lex at least has that. Style I mean.
"Training Mom" flows without too many hickups and above all gives the impression Jethro Ludite was inspired.
Am off. Gonna add a scientifical-sounding article on Wikipedia, about women sprouting from giant tits... see how they take it.
JJ (8/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jan 14, 2011)
- As usual your reviews are meaty and more than often very accurate. Glad to know that to date I've stayed on the tightrope you keep describing. By the way this one just slithered from my mind and took over. I'll try not to have too many like this.
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