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Robin and the Doctor Author: Abe
(Added on Jun 27, 2010) (This month 55135 readers) (Total 60290 readers)
A nurse, a doctor, and their dog share an intimate relationship.

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Oct 6, 2010
Am a bit disappointed with "Robin And The Doctor". because, what is a very promisong story, gets drowned in bad formatting and awkwardly spelled-out conversations.
The bad structure and stuff isn't Abe's usual style, as the few stories i've read from his hand were quite good. Both on the style as the story front.
Like I said, the story itself is good, just a pity that the reading is hampered because of the paragraphs being unevenly laid out, with parts of conversations following pieces of a narrative while both handle different subjects.
Also, it seems like Abe wanted to cram stuff inside the dialogue, which usually are explained in the narrative, giving the story again this unbalanced and awkward feel.
I would expect a 'better' job from abe...
JJ (7/10)

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