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sindi
Author: Atomage
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(Added on Jun 16, 2010)
(This month 56933 readers) (Total 70276 readers) |
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It is most unwise to wound a member of SUFFER, they are apt to take their revenge in the most terrible ways. In this little tale one such woman ensures that her abuser will regret her actions..........at length. |
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| Reviewer:
remissiva
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Jul 10, 2011 |
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Each of the character's have their own detailed stories. I like this style because as the reader one is able to get great insight and understanding as to what each of the character's are feeling from their own perspective and desires."Revenge I am told is a dish better served cold" (10/10)
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Dryhill
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Jun 21, 2010 |
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Wow is it possible to get any more coldly evil? i must remember never to get on the wrong side of the lady in this story.
A pity about the slips in grammar but more than made up by one fact and that is the name the doll/person is going to be called. i used to work in the British toy industry in the 1960's and that was a name i had long forgotten, so thanks for the memory. (10/10)
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bullfinch
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Jun 20, 2010 |
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I look forward to more tales about the SUFFER clan. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 16, 2010 |
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Cold, clinical recount of a horrid transformation, interspersed with lucid --almost insane-- musings, showing the outcome of a chilling, calculated revenge.
Sophisticated madness crossed with technological and biological genius.
Bar the few gutwrenching grammatical errors, this is the kind of story that leaves behind huge mushroom clouds of erotic fall-out.
For select readers only. But that counts for all the stories posted here.
Great stuff, Atomage.
JJ (10/10)
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