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Four peas
Author: Caine.Paine
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(Added on Jun 9, 2010)
(This month 82700 readers) (Total 99774 readers) |
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A wealthy married couple, brought together in their mutual, twisted love of power, abduct young women and force them to compete sexually for rank and privilege. How far will their kidnap victims go to satisfy their Lord and Mistress' depraved demands and rise above the others? |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dasii010
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Jun 15, 2012 |
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A wonderful story, full of imaginative humiliations and degrading sequences for the 4 heroines.
I especially like the concept of the girls being ranked against each other, forcing them into competition to avoid the worst role and to achieve the highest role their new owners allow for them.
I also love that the highest ranking "Pea" is forced to invent new humiliations for her companions.
All in all, I'd say this is a very competent, creative bdsm story that manages to be both believable and inventively fun for the reader, with no major grammatical errors that jumped out at me. (10/10)
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nominalista
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Feb 17, 2011 |
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I salute your technical inventiveness and your control of prose. I also particularly love the insidious corruption of Princess. I wonder what could be in store for her for the future. The four slaves come through as more believable characters than the evil couple. Perhaps the latter needs some deeper digging into their motives. (9/10)
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Dryhill
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Jun 14, 2010 |
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Not at all my type of story but very well told with a good deal of description (clothes, environment, state of mind of the various players). There is no doubt the two doms should be in a nice white padded room for the rest of their lives, but then there would be no story and no fun. (9/10)
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