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A Brutal Day in the Woods
Author: Dog_Man
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(Added on Jun 9, 2010)
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Carl is about to make some major changes in his life, but before he leaves, his older sister and a teenage girl visiting the US are both going to suffer tremendously. |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jan 19, 2012 |
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a bit brutal (for me) but the story idea is initially good (4/10)
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Terrier
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Apr 29, 2011 |
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I especially love the ending, even though it's sad about our hero, and I was hoping that the two girls would be buried alive. Great level of brutality. Would love to see that video! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
dog_man
(Edit) (May 8, 2011)
- I'm glad that you liked my story Brutal Day in the Woods. I wish that I could see more like it, especially like the old Uthur stories that were set in medieval times and featured tortures like nipple burning and the use of red hot breast rippers on milk-swollen mother's tits, but with even more realistic details of the damage done.
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teeny70
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Jun 21, 2010 |
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Fantastic. One of the best. Ranks with Susan Karlson's stories. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 15, 2010 |
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Story reads like an evaluation of some sorts or a newspaper article, interspersed with dialogue.
The set-up of the story is shabby and making the young delinquent an Arab feels a tad dubious.
As a consequence, "A Brutal Day In The Woods" turned into "A Tough Read At My Place" pretty soon.
The writing is okay, so there's hope at least.
JJ (4/10)
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- Replied by:
dog_man
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2010)
- Hello, there. I guess that you missed a couple of things. First, the delinquent Carl is not an Arab. Carl is an American who is discovering that he is a budding pedophile and sadist. He finds affirmation of this interest from a young Arab Muslim at the peace camp. The Arab is a facilitator, not the one who is doing the torture of the two young women. Carl is thinking about becoming a Muslim and moving to the Middle East because the Arab has convinced Carl that the latter's interests would be accepted there.
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2010)
- My mistake. Let's set these 'couple' of mistakes straight then: making the young delinquent a budding Muslim seems rather dubious...
JJ
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