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Begining of My new Life
Author: Slave4mistress
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(Added on Apr 27, 2010)
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This is a story of a slave and Mistress. how there relationship proceeds and attains new heights. A story of a Sadistic Mistress and Her slave |
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| Reviewer:
Transformateur
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Jul 11, 2016 |
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Only a long list of torture... no story...
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slavephil
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Sep 17, 2011 |
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I am assuming that English is your second or third language, but if you are going to write a story in English, you need to try and do a much better job with your grammar. I could not enjoy the story at all because I was constantly worried about how bad the grammar would be in every sentence. Maybe you should have someone look over it for you before submitting any more stories. Keep writing and you should get better! (3/10)
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