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Slavery 101
Author: Jon Smithie
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(Added on Apr 9, 2010)
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A group of college students agree to reenact antebellum slavery on a Southern plantation during Spring Break. They don't realize they're embarking on a life lesson. |
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| Reviewer:
grinner666
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Apr 20, 2010 |
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Bits and pieces of this story are VERY good, but the overall plot is lacking. I know it's sometimes considered gauche to bring objective reality into a review of a pornographic story, but really ... Major Littman is right. In the first place, what in the world do drug distributors want a coffle of slaves for? And second and even more important,there's so many students here you can't keep track of their names without a friggin' program. Are we supposed to believe that NONE of them informed a relative, friend or neighbor of where they were going to be for a week? Nobody had a pet that needed taking care of, nobody's mother wanted to get together during the week they were going to be gone? Somehow I doubt that, and since kidnapping-for-profit is one of those crimes the FBI takes so seriously that it's basically unheard of any more in the US, I would think that this woman would, since she cares so much about her land, come up with a plan that is slightly less than 100% guaranteed to see her put in the slam for the rest of her life. That said, a lot of the separate scenes are hot as hell, and the idea, though flawed, is well worth exploring. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Smithie, Jon
(Edit) (Apr 23, 2010)
- Thanks to all for the comments and emails. I really appreciate them. I'm encouraged to give part 2 a go, and see if I can't settle some of the plausibility issues.
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poppet_LM
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Apr 14, 2010 |
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i enjoyed this story very much - it is believable and hold's one's interest. i would definitely be interested in reading the rest of the story. (10/10)
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Major Littmann
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Apr 14, 2010 |
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It's good, but the plot is a bit threadbare, as in why would the drug runners want slaves? and maybe there are more characters than are ideal but some of the set pieces are good while the structure is wesk, presumably they all die in part 12 a and I'm sure I will be bored by part 4 but it's recommendable. (8/10)
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switchy76
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Apr 9, 2010 |
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great story if a little to short. love to hear more chapters. (9/10)
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travelin.fool
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Apr 9, 2010 |
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Can't wait for the next chapter. (10/10)
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