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Humanitarian famine assistance
Author: Rotneb
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(Added on Apr 5, 2010)
(This month 13971 readers) (Total 28655 readers) |
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Kathy's participation in a demonstration in favour of famine is fatal to her, because politicians are too slow to allocate enough relief. |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jul 3, 2011 |
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Sorry i had to give up reading this piece of ...... writing. There are too many spelling errors and the grammar is unreadable. The first paragraph gave me the first clue that there were going tro be problems:-
- ... I will finish my talk on the gruesome hunger problems in Africa, due to several unfortunate circumstances in connection with wars and climate. A whole world is starving. People lack first of all food. "
Firstly it is not the whole world. i know trhat Africa is a large part of the worls but is not the whole of it.
Secondly if people are starving it is always from lack of food ......... duh dumb.
i agree with Major Littmann this really should be a zero.
(1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Losalt
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Apr 19, 2010 |
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The idea might not be to bad..
But I didn't have the stamina to read it all in one go (I'll read a bit more later)
So far it looks like the actual spelling is rather good but that you need to work on the word order to make the story readable.. Possibly other grammar errors would need to be fixed too for readability.. (2/10)
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Major Littmann
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Apr 13, 2010 |
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I'm sorry but the mixture of nakedness, sex and cannibalism doesn't work.
Maybe if the girls hadn't been taken to Africa naked but they went thinking they were to help feed the starving and then found they were the food!, stripped raped eaten, totlly believeable, unlike being transported naked.
Sorry but this is really a Zero (1/10)
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Michael247
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Apr 13, 2010 |
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I'm sorry. This story might actually have a decent plot, but the horrible grammar makes it practically unreadable. (2/10)
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