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Turning into Cherry
Author: slave lily
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(Added on Apr 4, 2010)
(This month 16976 readers) (Total 33894 readers) |
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A young lady is converted into the perfect slave. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Apr 8, 2010 |
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I found the tale to be predictable but not without promise. Something tells me that English is not the author's native tongue. Either that or the author was in too much of a hurry to bother editing this story. In fact, the story's first sentence begins the error laden tale. Go back and edit this story and you may have something worth reading. Otherwise, the errors are too distracting for this tale to be enjoyable. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 6, 2010 |
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A little predictable, but hopefully this story will continue and future chapters will be more imaginative.
What was unbelievable was not talking to the cat, everyone i know who has a cat talks to it. However a clever touch having the cat taken away from her, the start of her life being taken from her? (7/10)
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kemosabe
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Apr 6, 2010 |
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Extremely erotic. An interesting development of a woman's willingness to yield to slavery. Looking forward to further instalments. (8/10)
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