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Slavegirls of the Sultan
Author: Hank
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(Added on Apr 4, 2010)
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A group of american schoolgirels are shipwrecked in the Arabian Sea and become slaves of the Sultan who decides to rid them of their lustful desires |
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| Reviewer:
gypsiecowboy
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May 2, 2010 |
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well your writing needs to be cleaned up, grammar and spelling need corrections. but I like the ideas you begin with, no where is this story going from here? (5/10)
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kemosabe
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Apr 6, 2010 |
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Wham bam, thank you maam! Not much plot development here but already we are into body modification! Can't imagine where this story is going to. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Icemaiden
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2010)
- good
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