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Author: pamela
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(Added on Mar 30, 2010)
(This month 103056 readers) (Total 124362 readers) |
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Newpaper editor encounters various aspects of female submission. |
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| Reviewer:
delish
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Jun 21, 2011 |
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I'm finding that Pamela's subject matter is very hit or miss for me, and sometimes her writing is better than others. I found the Brian/Christy storyline to be really unnecessary- not only did it not add any depth to the story (for me), it actually detracted from it at the end. Why bother getting invested in the narrator and the other two stories only to leave his ending so... unfulfilled? I found that aspect of the narrative entirely mystifying. The composition was pretty decent, otherwise, but it's not my favorite of this author's works by a long shot. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Losalt
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May 12, 2010 |
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A good story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
sedmwif
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Apr 8, 2010 |
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Another outstanding piece of work! Great idea, well structured, a professional job. (10/10)
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DeGrinch
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Apr 2, 2010 |
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Hey, thank you for a great story. The sentence structure and dialogue were good. It could have used a little time with a spell checker, and I have a hard time seeing a guy giving away/sharing that great pussy once, let alone twice, but OK. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Malus
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Mar 31, 2010 |
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Top story. Long and involved with a good insight into the female psyche. A joy to read. (10/10)
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