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Choices
Author: subtle
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(Added on Mar 16, 2002)
(This month 9417 readers) (Total 17912 readers) |
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Sub is treated to some unique dinner conversation by her Dom and is asked, quite politely, to choose from some various menu items... |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Cokera
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Dec 27, 2004 |
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I really liked the theme of your story. I was left with a question as to how is or where is this going. The skills are there but the follow up would be nice! In this arena of creative writing you show that you are very talented. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Dec 26, 2004 |
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This story, the first you posted here, reveals your skill as a writer. Many would attempt to milk the story for length, or make multiple chapters (and thereby take away the opportunity for the reader to use imagination to picture the rest.)
The story is enjoyable, realistic, and should be publishable. (9/10)
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honeycombz
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Dec 3, 2004 |
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as i said before, excellent story, though i wish there would be a second and third part...i love this story!!! (9/10)
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bdsmbill
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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The first review confuses me. The reviewer gives a long, and, I thought, quite complimentary review, and then gives the story a 5? Where did that come from? This story is better than that, and the review I refer to is insulting on another level as well, as the revierer seems to think that the sub in the story must be the author. I think this writer is good enough to create a character from scratch. (8/10)
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l_anguissette
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May 18, 2003 |
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subtle, I love your work. Beyond applauding your excellent command of the English language (a must, I cannot stress that enough!), I find your stories reflect your name well-- they are crafted subtly, and a distinct pleasure to read. I'd like to see more!
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InternalyDriven
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Aug 9, 2002 |
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Not a bad piece of writing for the first in a number of stories from this author. In her own unique way the writer is telling us that she has a great depth of personality, and seeks deep meaningful relationships from everyone she encounters in life. In the story the main character (the sub) values her intuition over sensation, values feeling over thinking, values judgement over perception, and lastly values her introversion over extroversion. It's my bet that the writer is communicating with us her own intricately woven mysterious personalities, some of which sometimes puzzles herself. Overall the feeling is good. However, as a Master I would have preferred to see more of a "connection" between Master & sub...perhaps a more concentrated gazing in the eyes between the two parties involved as well as the Master sensuously and slowly playing with the sub's beautiful hair. Ah yes, "Choices"...often what's NOT SAID is far more important than what is said...the subtle! (5/10)
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