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Owning Beth
Author: Karen Kay
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(Added on Mar 7, 2010)
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A gorgeous young wife is raped by her black boss. She soon discovers that she loves his size and they way he controls her. Now he wants to bred his new bitch. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Mar 9, 2010 |
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I agree with JJ almost completely. The writing is very good compared with a lot of the stories here, however, the story its self lacks 'zest' it has no feeling of real emotion from the characters. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 7, 2010 |
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Fairly well-written excerpt which reads like "an evening in the life of...". Fairly, because the use of too many of the same words in too short a space.
"Owning Beth" is a tad disappointing too, because it ends where the real fun should start.
But what's there is more than okay --bar the aformentioned need of some synonyms. Entertaining, exciting and nicely flowing, "Owning Beth" is a nice read, which deserves to be worked-out a bit more, both in characterization as in scope.
Good.
JJ (8/10)
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