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Letter from Good Hope Road
Author: Shoeblossom
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(Added on Feb 26, 2010)
(This month 49667 readers) (Total 51625 readers) |
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Drayton, a black ex-con was amazed when male and female slaves began paying him to dominate them! |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Mar 18, 2010 |
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Hello Shoeblossom.
I said in my last review that I looked forward to reading more of your work and it seeems I have gotten my chance. I did like this story as well. It was a different approach, for me anyway, but it worked. I viewed it as little snippets in to his new life. For the most part you were consistent with the needs of your characters but a little more could have been said about how they got there, to that point. Nothing major. Maybe another line or two. And lastly, it must be said that is definately not bad work if you can get it !!! Again I look forward to reading more. (7/10)
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