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    | Reviewer: 
    chromedome11
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Feb 28, 2010 |   
    |  | Needs to be edited to make it readable. (3/10) 
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    Mr. Willit
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Feb 25, 2010 |   
    |  | The formatting alone makes it look like the work of a mental patient, and the premise all but seals the deal.  If you were going for some kind of "lunatic" gimmick, mission accomplished, but it's a difficult and unfulfilling read. (3/10) 
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    Major Littmann
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Feb 25, 2010 |   
    |  | I was left wondering if the author needed therapy. A thoroughly depressingly nasty piece of work,unexciting but with unintentionally interesting concepts such as a soar asshole maybe a typo for sore but there are nmuch better stories than this on BDSMlibrary  (4/10)
 
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    | Reviewer: 
    ArosDK
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Feb 22, 2010 |   
    |  | the author ought to read it one more time  (2/10) 
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