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The Atonement Author: Racecar
(Added on Aug 14, 2000) (This month 108015 readers) (Total 158907 readers)
She killed a man in a car accident and ran away. The only witness, her best friend, seduced her hunsband and together made her their little slave.

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Number of Ratings: 23
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Weighed Average (?): (9/10)
Average Rating: (9.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: graymangazer (Edit) Rating: Jun 24, 2012
I read this story some years ago and decided it was about time I made a comment.
Atonement is probably my favorite story on this site.
The plot was original at the time of writing and is still better than others I have read of the same blackmail/slave genre.
The situations are plausible and very detailed, not to mention very erotic, as are the characters.
Cheryl is cruel and as she becomes more dominant, causing Barbara to be ever more submissive, the torments for her slave can only get worse.
As a married male I can understand John`s position exactly, the thought of one`s wife being dominated by another woman is, to me, highly exciting (it`s not something I would condone in reality though).
Some of the scenes of Barbara`s suffering are really hot and the way the story is written could lead to endless situations.
I think it`s a shame that the author stopped writing as there is so much more that could be done with this story.
My only gripe is the final chapter. Written by another author, though with all good intentions does not follow the plot in any way.
But then everyone has their own ideas of what is erotic.
Anyway thanks for a truly great story.
(10/10)

Reviewer: Panther007 (Edit) Rating: Jan 17, 2011
Put me in with those that wished this author had done more. Excellent work her. (10/10)

Reviewer: Dryhill (Edit) Rating: May 9, 2010
A few spelling mistakes and words missing, but these do not detract from a good story with plenty of pace and action, i look foreward to reading the other chapters. (9/10)

Reviewer: vikikur (Edit) Rating: Mar 21, 2010
thanks - famously (10/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Feb 3, 2009
My only grunt is towards the seeming obsession with some writers of having their blackmailers wanting to be called "master" or in this case "mistress", from the word "go".
It's tedious and a show of lack of inventiveness.
But the story is excellent of course.
JJ (9/10)

Reviewer: C_Lakewood (Edit) Rating: Apr 21, 2004
I can't add much to the kudos already won by this excellent story -- except to point out that Part 6 is by a different writer. It is puerile and badly edited and certainly far below the high quality of the original. (9/10)

Reviewer: ladys_maid (Edit) Rating: May 19, 2003
Very hot story that left me wanting so much more! Nicely crafted and deeply exciting. (9/10)

Reviewer: Harold Rating: Apr 8, 2001
One of my favourites. Excellent (10/10)

Reviewer: wendall Rating: Mar 17, 2001
i like this story very much.Hopfully many more whippings and buggerings for Barb. Any of the conclusions hopefully not! by Racecar are fine (7/10)

Reviewer: aceRcher Rating: Mar 10, 2001
This is one of my all-time favorites-completely compelling. I only wish this author had written others like this. (10/10)

Reviewer: Anonymous Rating: Dec 28, 2000
Excellent! (10/10)

Reviewer: bb Rating: Nov 29, 2000
the best tale (tail?) on this site (10/10)

Reviewer: RA Rating: Nov 15, 2000
Hard to imagine a better humiliation tale. Believable, erotic, imaginative ... none better! (10/10)

Reviewer: missy(M) Rating: Sep 21, 2000
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!! and VERY exciting (9/10)

Reviewer: Kim Rating: Sep 20, 2000
Not bad, but there wasn't anything original in it in my opinion. A lot like a lot of other stories. A 5 or 6 ? (5/10)
Replied by: johe110 (Oct 15, 2000)
This story was written 8 or 9 years ago and was quite popular when first posted then. It's rather difficult to find anything "original" in blackmail stories these days.

Reviewer: SlyBob Rating: Sep 19, 2000
This is a great story. The woman spirals ever deeper into submission and humiliation. There are new twists and surprises for the reader as one sceen leads to another. (10/10)

Reviewer: edge Rating: Sep 17, 2000
Great scenes,,,wonderful descriptions of blackmail and humiliation,,,well done!! (10/10)

Reviewer: tattoo pat Rating: Sep 9, 2000
very nice story between 7 and 8 (7/10)

Reviewer: Engineer Rating: Sep 8, 2000
Hot story! Excellent style. Full of good ideas. Not a simple blackmailed-for fucking/trashing story. (9/10)

Reviewer: ABrunetteWoman Rating: Sep 5, 2000
Quite a good story. Quite well written with some interesting ideas. (6/10)
Replied by: C_Lakewood (Edit) (Apr 21, 2004)
Your review is more complimentary than your rating. Didn't you read the definition of a "6"?

Reviewer: bigefire Rating: Sep 5, 2000
It's just a well written fantastic story! I hope the auther has at least ten more chapters in the works. (10/10)

Reviewer: Frank Rating: Aug 28, 2000
Possibly the best story I have ever read (10/10)

Reviewer: netman Rating: Aug 14, 2000
along with owened teacher,just about the most compulsive and well constucted blackmail story i have come across {no pun intended} (9/10)
Replied by: C_Lakewood (Edit) (Apr 21, 2004)
"Owned Teacher" was excellent much of the way, and I'm very fond of that story. But the author, Thumb, got sick (and possibly bored and/or impatient and/or burnt out) towards the end. The big orgy scene was,for example, ludicrous and completely unbelievable. "The Atonement," on the other hand, maintains a wonderful plausibility through to the end.

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