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your need, My whip
Author: Midnytedreams
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(Added on Jan 28, 2010)
(This month 10813 readers) (Total 16909 readers) |
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the meeting of two a Dom and a sub , and the story begins |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
LaciePauline
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Feb 10, 2010 |
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your spelling was horrible... your grammer was atrocious and the story was boring, slow moving and mediocre... (3/10)
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Major Littmann
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Jan 28, 2010 |
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It started well and then wandered into second person describing what "You" meaning I felt, and it fell flat at that point. It was down around 3/10 by the end. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
vedonis74
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Jan 28, 2010 |
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I really liked the story, very erotic to a sub like me! However the poor grammar and numerous typos were very distracting. Can't you get it proof read? Because otherwise it's pretty hot. Thank you. (6/10)
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