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Robyn
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Jan 3, 2010)
(This month 60215 readers) (Total 80438 readers) |
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Robyn wanted to be a model. some girls should think very carefully about what they want, in case some evil bastard gives it to them. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 25, 2012 |
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Not my style as its more horror than erotic. However, it was written well. (5/10)
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littleone_
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Jan 25, 2010 |
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Different. Spooky. Kind of Scary. There were a few insignificant typos and they were so minor the didn't subtract from the over impact of the story. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
falan
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Jan 9, 2010 |
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Well written for a short story but needs more detail to make it believable, would also benefit from better developement of the characters. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Venom
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Jan 9, 2010 |
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Let's say this is "Part 1" as the subtitle announces, then it could be the beginning of a good story... (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
niftyfree
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Jan 6, 2010 |
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An excellent short story about extreme naivety and bondage. It hangs a "Part 1" subtitle but stands on its own as a tale of a young woman's hope and betrayal, the details of her terrible fate left mostly to the readers' imaginations.
Note that there's no sex in this story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 5, 2010 |
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While not a bad write, the story is silly and utter nonsense.
It could have been worked out to something 'better', but this sometimes seems the naure of Excalibur's beast, in that this author often posts shorts in the form of half thought-out essays, instead of well worked-out stories. Too bad.
JJ (5/10)
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- Replied by:
littleone_
(Edit) (Jan 25, 2010)
- I don't think JimmyJump gets the point. He should read the review written after this one.
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 30, 2010)
- What's your point in saying I don't get the point? I read the story, and wrote what I felt. I got the point but found the whole to be lacking in quality to the point of making no sense. That's it. Now, again, what exactly was your point?
JJ
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