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The Bartender and the Slave
Author: ruthellen
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(Added on Jan 3, 2010)
(This month 55229 readers) (Total 73503 readers) |
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A bartender abducts a girl who frequents his bar and seems to be just what he's looking for and He is just what she came looking for! |
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| Reviewer:
avidreader
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Jun 24, 2010 |
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God, a chapter 2 would be nice please? Why do all these other people seem to care so much for litterary point of view? I come for me, not for grammar and characters. You get the job done for me, write more! (9/10)
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peterlesade
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Jan 8, 2010 |
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I very much liked the two different points of view from the dominant barman to the willing slave and what he did to her in a short space of time was very enjoyable. A few revisions needed to make it really good and more from the slave's point of view in terms of what she wants. (8/10)
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