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Ghosts of Trysts Past
Author: Ty_M_Goode
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(Added on Dec 29, 2009)
(This month 11270 readers) (Total 19378 readers) |
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A lethario's recent past catches up with him. Written in the first person. |
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| Reviewer:
Michael247
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May 31, 2010 |
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I am not usually one to read F/m stories. I'm a dominant by nature and rarely enjoy reading about another male's submission. I've only written ONE F/m story and even then, the male technically didn't submit, he was forced, much like "Ghosts of Trysts Past".
* Once again I can only express my pleasure at reading T.M. Goode's work. This story was creative, well written, and showcased again his exquisite ability to describe a situation or scene with clarity. There weren't any "anti-descriptions" in this story, which I was beginning to think were a Goode trademark, but that's a construction quirk and doesn't really relate to whether a story is good or not. (Or is it goode?)
*** There were a few minor errors in the story, but those didn't really detract from the reading. Their instead of they're. That kind of thing.
*** I had trouble believing the plot line. The ninth woman is actually a setup? And the women all pitched in to purchase what is no doubt a rather expensive outfit? And then they take him to a biker bar? Geeze, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. If the narrator (different from the author) had RAPED these women, okay, sure. I can see that. But to receive this kind of punishment for just having sex and moving on? Seriously? Damn. Glad I'm married and monogamous. Women are getting cruel these days!
*** I have to admit that I found this erotic. I didn't really imagine myself in the story, but it was still a turn on.
*** I seem to be reading T.M. Goode stories backward from the way they were posted, so I suppose me saying "another great story from T.M. Goode" is slightly strange, but that's the truth. Another well done. Michael Alexander (www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (9/10)
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