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Suicide Boy
Author: Dorothy Strangelove
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(Added on Dec 20, 2009)
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Joanna is in love with Cain, they regularly indulge in the joys of role play, with Cain as the patient and Joanna as his nurse, but Cain has a darkness inside him that threatens their relatonship in such a way that it could end up destroying him... |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 23, 2009 |
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I don't rate according to the percentage of bonking going on in a story. First of all because that is not the point, and secondly, because such a treatment is an injustice to the author.
"Suicide Boy" is by far the most painful story by Miss Strangelove. In the sense that both main characters are being devoured by it. Pain. And fear. Fear of the past. Of the Now. Fear for the future. Fear for each other also. Of what might happen. Or not happen.
Funny enough, that's what love is all about, isn't it. The pain and the fear. When a love is too intense, that is.
"Suicide Boy" is once again a beautiful story, well-crafted, with just enough detail to paint a clear picture and enough vagueness to keep you guessing.
Not a lot of sex, no. But most solid relationships aren't based on sex. They're based on love and the trust that comes with it. The sex is a nice addition, certainly when it's good, for both parties involved.
Dorothy's stories aren't about sex. They're about human relations and the quirks, kinks and hurdles that come with it. The sex is a nice addition, certainly when it's good, for all parties involved. After all, we're talking quality here, not quantity.
Maybe some people don't like Clint Eastwood's "Unforgiven" because there's not enough gunfights or 'Injuns' in it. But that doesn't change the fact that it's one of the best Westerns ever made...
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
dorothystrangelove
(Edit) (Dec 24, 2009)
- Thank you for such a great review, yes, there is more of the characters and less erotic content, and the story is about pain, and love, and how a man's journey into darkness has brought him out of it a changed person, but although the woman he loves fears the worst as the conclusion begins to draw, the situation changes around and theres a happy ending showing that even the darkest of situations can have a bright conclusion even when its not expected. Plus this story takes a look at roots of fetish and kink, all kinks start somewhere and in this case the roots were dark but lead to a happy conclusion. It's my December contribution and says Merry Christmas everyone from Dorothy Strangelove :-)
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Curtis
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Dec 22, 2009 |
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I'm sorry if a rating this low upsets the author. The problem I had was that this was a much better story than it was porn. It's maybe 8 or 9 for literature value and 5 or 6 for erotic content. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
dorothystrangelove
(Edit) (Dec 24, 2009)
- Thank you, I find that to be a good review, thank you for appreciating the story side as much as the touch of erotic content that was woven into it, I wanted this story to show a couple and the roots of their fetish play - coming from something dark - that actually turns into and ending that seems to be spiralling dark but actually has a bright and happy conclusion. Not all my stories aresolidly about sex, I often prefer to write a plot with other storylines in there to produce a full tale with weight that takes the reader on a journey, I find this way many of my readers enjoy the story all the more, sometimes this means there is less erotic content and sometimes more, I hope you keep reading my fiction as I have many other stories that cover all kinds of themes and scenarios, and some have more erotica than others.But thank you for your review.
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