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The Final Battle (Revised) Author: Faibhar
(Added on Dec 17, 2009) (This month 20381 readers) (Total 33110 readers)

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jun 24, 2010
Well told, well written story, slightly hampered by Faibhar's attempts at using some form of 'ancient' language.
It's not that Faibhar fails, it's that the language is used inconsistently.
"The Final Battle" (revised or otherwise) reads like a cross between a King Arthur tale and a rough draft of the first Highlander screenplay.
Very good.
JJ (9/10)

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