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MPI
Author: Aiken
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(Added on Feb 27, 2002)
(This month 109047 readers) (Total 184959 readers) |
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It is a harsher future for women than even in Miss Juniper’s world. International law now condones
gynophagia. MPI, a top vendor of the new concession, trains a new employee. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kicksnf
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Jun 14, 2011 |
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SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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Exceptionally well written and deserves a 10 for that. Exceedingly non-erotic concept for a story and deserves a 0 for that. This dry lunacy just is not stimulating. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Mar 14, 2005 |
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An interesting entry in the Dolcett genre. Some have called it clinical or businesslike, and perhaps it is, but perversely, that adds to its erotica for me. (8/10)
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snippet
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Nov 9, 2004 |
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More chapters, please! :-) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Mar 1, 2004 |
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The business-like setting of the first chapter will have many running for their next powerpoint project. Later chapters turn more mechanical with talk of shunts and even cursive writing. Unless one is fond of mad cow disease and other arcania, "MPI" might be one to pass. (6/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Feb 23, 2004 |
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Holy Smokes, Bullwinkle, spit roasted pussy in Cleveland! I like the sense of whimsy. Actually, as an author and frequent reviewer I thought veru's review was quite cogent and to the point. If you want to see some real pans hunt around for a story with ratings of 2 and 3. Also ratings are often issued after only 2 or 3 chapters have been posted and I frequently change my ratings as the story evolves. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
veru_skjava
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Oct 26, 2002 |
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Honest I have mixed feelings about this story, its enjoyable enough in parts to keep me reading, yet the premise gets overworked to the point of boring me. If half way through an update I say, "hmm OK same stuff, shrugs" and click back to home to find something with more to "grab" me. My rating was a quandary, wanting to be fair, writing skills are acceptable. I just got bored
nice update, I just finished chapter 7, and the story has prgressed very nicely, therefore I have upgraded the rating I previously gave the story. Nice inventive erotica and characterization. I look forward to further updates (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
sarah
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Oct 13, 2002 |
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Hi veru_skjava - I can't overstate the time, effort and courage it takes to post stories here for public enjoyment. Couldn't you show more courtesy than to pan works you admittedly haven't read completely?...anyway take heart Aiken there are many fans who DO enjoy your work!
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
veru_skjava
(Edit) (Oct 26, 2002)
- hi sarah,
I did read it, I said I got bored in an update and I did. I also believe a review is to assit the author in improving the story, I found your review after reading the latest update and deciding to upgrade my previous reveiw. Aiken is indeed a promising author. As a promising author my review was honest as I saw it at that point. Be well...
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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Jun 20, 2002 |
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More More More! (9/10)
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