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Torture Botique
Author: Paladin
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(Added on Aug 14, 2000)
(This month 107169 readers) (Total 145306 readers) |
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She went to a fashion house just for some new clothes, but ended as a bound slave of a sex club and serving the customers. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ramses
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Feb 5, 2008 |
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The plot isn't very original, but a nice story anyway. I agree with the comments on the spelling mistakes. They do make the story more difficult to read. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Aug 2, 2005 |
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You got a little panned on this story. I liked it but it felt unfinished. You left us wanting more...I agree with the spelling errors and word usage, but a good story anyway. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan |
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Mar 18, 2001 |
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The problem with spell checkers is that they are no help when you use the
wrong word but spell it correctly. When I read the reviews, I thought the guy
who complained about the "giggle of her tits" was being a bit stuffy, but having
read the story, I agree with him. This story was hard to read. A major error in
nearly every paragraph, no plot to speak of, stilted dialog, lots of typos--this
writer is incompetent. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer |
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Sep 8, 2000 |
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Not simply a good piece of writer's craftswork, but an excellent style as well as spirit and a good story. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
sahm |
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Aug 16, 2000 |
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what that is is feeling, not arty farty a bloody good read (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Johnson |
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Aug 14, 2000 |
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What?! "...or a giggle of her tits..."; what the hell is that? (1/10)
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