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A Day in the Life
Author: Anonymous
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(Added on Feb 25, 2002)
(This month 16868 readers) (Total 49710 readers) |
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Actually, as yet not even a day. This story chronicles Susan, a prison of she-don't-know-who, trapped within an automated dungeon with no humans in sight. The first story/chapter/whatever is "the web room". Soon to come: the capture itself, which I suppose might make the "web room" clearer, and other things she goes through. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
| Average
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| Reviewer:
JustAnotherGuy
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Mar 31, 2012 |
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Well done. Left me on the edge of my seat, wanting more, just as she was kept in her seat. ;-) (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Contrary to what my six-score might indicate, I very much liked "A Day In The Life", if not for the idea, then sure for the vision of the possibilities.
But that's just it. There's nothing else but the envisioning of the possibilities, as blip found it necessary to rush everything because he "has other things to do"...
Okay. That's cool. But, instead of posting a rushed story, next time he'd better wait until these 'other things' are done. Then continue the story. And *then* post it.
And if the author considers my six treatment to be unfair, he himself might contemplate a situation, say at school, where a teacher expects a finished work but is handed a 'sketch'...
JJ (6/10)
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jenjen
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Sep 15, 2008 |
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good stuff! (9/10)
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sayuna
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Aug 12, 2008 |
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would have been nice with more detail and description, still nice concept (7/10)
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grinningdaemon
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Sep 25, 2007 |
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great story! i only wish you had finished it. Did you write any other stories with similar themes? (9/10)
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cariad(CC)
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Aug 16, 2006 |
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A perfect example of less being more. Great writing. But when are you going to finish it? I agree with the don11 - would have given a 10 if you had just polished the ending a little. (9/10)
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Jendo
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Mar 13, 2006 |
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Take a little more time to explaine why she would obey a computer and not just avoid its control.
Also no background.
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- Replied by:
blip
(Edit) (May 2, 2006)
- Consider it a sketch, an attempt at what might have been. It'll be pretty obvious by now that I'm not finishing it, but I'll be using the ideas in the next few...
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jan 30, 2006 |
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exiting, something different, well done. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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May 5, 2005 |
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A very nice piece -- short and to the point, with a great central concept behind it. Very well done. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ackalon
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Jan 8, 2004 |
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Fun. Nice idea, look forward to there being more (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
don11
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Jun 2, 2003 |
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Excellent - poor ending else would have been 10.
Great idea (9/10)
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Lareth
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Jul 14, 2002 |
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A most interesting variation of the White Room theme... I'ld like to see more of this... (10/10)
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moonflower
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Mar 31, 2002 |
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WOW, this is great ^_^. i could feel every detail of the story while i was reading it, it was WONDERFUL!!! (9/10)
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