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Kat in Trouble
Author: DarkShadow Eternal
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(Added on Feb 17, 2002)
(This month 58922 readers) (Total 78337 readers) |
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A burglar with a love and passion for her job, finds herself being trapped and bound unknowingly by her own temptation by the lure of latex on a job. A fantasy tale about crime and an unusual punishment dealt by the one she chose to rob. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
| Average
Rating: (5/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Mar 13, 2005 |
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had great potential based on the codes but it died after that (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
slave ruthie
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Jul 17, 2004 |
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when i first read this one, i couldn't help grinning because i enjoyed the story immensely! i'm not really in a position to judge the grammar but it might be ummmm helped in the ratings if it was revised in places. but overall i liked this one :) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
catbell
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May 9, 2002 |
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a bit long winded and obviouse would like to she if a part two would improve it (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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Apr 24, 2002 |
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This story has problems on a couple of levels. First off, it's about twice as long
as it should be, due to overlong redundant sentences. For instance,
"She had recently moved to Denver, Colorado a couple weeks ago." should be
"She had recently moved to Denver." The story would flow much better with
concise sentences.
The main problem, however, is that the story is unbelievable and uninteresting.
Unbelievable because no woman her size is going to demonstrate catlike agility
while impaled on a 3 inch diameter butt plug. Unbelievable that a professional
burglar would stop to try on clothes that she could just as easily take with her
and try on in safe surroundings. Uninteresting in that there are no surprises.
It's no surprise when Kat finds herself locked into the suit. We saw that coming,
why didn't she? No one is surprised when the owner of the house just happens
to be home and grabs her from behind. There is one amusing aspect. It
seems the owner of the house intends to torment her by pontificating in long
boring sentences. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
marsv
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Mar 3, 2002 |
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Really loved the kink in this story and the fetish involved. Weak ending and would like to see a second part done. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
peppermint
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Feb 18, 2002 |
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this is the first writing. (2/10)
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