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An Unhappy Birthday
Author: Tom Justin
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(Added on Feb 11, 2002)
(This month 22683 readers) (Total 48266 readers) |
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An Earl's daughter is publically whipped on her birthdays in front of the household staff. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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mkemse
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Jan 4, 2006 |
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wherther others reader seem to notice or not, you are at least consistant with all your stories, (9/10)
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readyben
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Dec 31, 2005 |
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Wow! Excellently written, a little wordy, great treatment of the theme, arousing, doesn't need editing. Thanks!! (10/10)
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sys0p
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Apr 14, 2004 |
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well done story, but without a good plot (8/10)
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crickette
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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I enjoyed reading "An Unhappy Birthday". I thought it was well written and easy to follow. I thought the language used really added to the period it was set in. You definately have a gift for using the written word to make to reader see what you are seeing. (9/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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May 11, 2002 |
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The premise is somewhat unlikely, (that's nothing new around here ;-) but the author's use of language to lovingly describe eash lash is first rate. (9/10)
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patma
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Feb 20, 2002 |
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The author has a exceptional conduct of the language. On top of that, the way he describes the various torments to which the victim is submitted is filled with respect. (9/10)
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