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The auction
Author: Anne
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(Added on Dec 15, 2009)
(This month 80691 readers) (Total 86585 readers) |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 29, 2011 |
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As JimmyJump states this type of story has been told so many times, but this one is different. To the others in the story Suzie is portrayed as a slutt, even a whore, Suzie herself, however is portrayed as what she really is, a well trained and perfectly obediant slave.
Well done Anne for showing how some see a sub/slave and how we sub/slave see ourselves. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Another one of those instances where you're being confronted with a tale of which the storyline has been done so many times I need extra fingers to keep count.
But, instead of being a bland, uninspired rehash of the theme, Anne manages to capture a certain mood, by giving a great 'feel' of her female character.
Everything she does or thinks comes across as natural, agrees completely with her persona.
Conversations are short, but accurate and telltale, giving the needed little details as we go along.
And although Anne is a 'neighbour' of mine (ich komme aus Belgien, Flandern) her English is far better than that of many English speaking folk. Okay, so maybe Anne whipped a translation program into obedience, although she doesn't seem the kind to do the whipping.
Anyway, congratulations on your mastering of the English language. And on a great little story, of course.
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Anne4humiliation
(Edit) (Oct 10, 2010)
- Dear Jimmy,
thank you for your great reviews (this one and the one about 'Paying the Price'. It really makes me proud to have people like my stories so much.
And (here comes the bragging part) I do not use translation programmes, they suck! And that (sorry about the pun) is my part
Anne
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