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Emma is punished
Author: Rob True
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(Added on Mar 14, 2009)
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Emma is a timid girl who is caught kissing somebody's boyfriend. She is dominated and humiliated by another girl. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 22, 2012 |
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Very good story & very fun to read. However, I also think this story could have been better in the first four chapters & I'm hoping the future chapters have more depth. Where is this story going? I think it would have been hot if very early in the story Sarah would have forced Emma to perform oral sex on her in front of all the girls. The humiliation level would have been very high if Sarah would have followed this act by having Emma perform oral sex on all of Emma's friends before taking her home. This could turn into a good D/s love story depending on how the author decides to take this story. Not sure how to get past Sarah proclaiming that she's straight, but I'm still excited to see where this story goes in the future. I just hope new chapters come sooner than later. (9/10)
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non-writer
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Dec 2, 2011 |
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Excellent Story. I hope to read more chapters in the future (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
dorothystrangelove
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Mar 26, 2009 |
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I am not typically drawn to all female stories, but I enjoyed this because of the dialogue between the sb and the dominant (the dominant girl could just have easily have been a master talking to a slave and it was very good), I liked the level of humiliation and the story was worth reading. I hope you write more. (7/10)
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thehammerspakeagain
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Mar 24, 2009 |
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the plot was trite, but the description was good. unless the author can come up with better plots, the story is done for. (6/10)
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efwb2
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Mar 18, 2009 |
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loved the stroy cant wait to read the rest (10/10)
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mc117s
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Mar 16, 2009 |
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Very good start can't wait to read the rest.
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rocket71
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Mar 16, 2009 |
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GREAT STORY..Hope there is more. (9/10)
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Major Littmann
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Mar 14, 2009 |
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A very promising start, I look forward to something less tame in further chapters. (8/10)
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