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Careless Wishes
Author: Ayla Jaxxon
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(Added on Mar 1, 2009)
(This month 13880 readers) (Total 24798 readers) |
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A young woman and her friends are taken into sexual slavery. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Dec 17, 2011 |
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Excellent story! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Mar 15, 2011 |
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A little bit more characterization would have been nice, but only for the slaves not for the Mistress for obvious reasons. i love the ending, i did not see that scenario coming.
I hpe we are going to get more about Abigail and Iza and of course about Mistress. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 20, 2009 |
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Good story, fairly written. Abit more depth could have done wonders, as would a synonym for the word "just"...
Nothing to go all "ooh-aah" about, but a nice read.
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
vampmaster
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Mar 1, 2009 |
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a very good story, sometimes i could have used some more details but only cause situations were so good. (10/10)
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