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Caroline's Commitment
Author: BZ
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(Added on Jan 30, 2002)
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Caroline meets her future Beau at a networking party. Her interest is peaked by a curious business card. She discovers her submisive nature, and this leads to matrimony. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Fetterer
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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This sort of story is tried often by authors trying to write bdsm fiction. Frequently, the story bogs down on details. This author, on the other hand, seems to have too quickly glossed over the details. I would encourage the author to give a little more thought on how the woman went from strong and independent to a loving sub. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
bcsollte
(Edit) (Jul 15, 2005)
- Fetterer
This was only my second effort in the bdsm realm. And this lack of detail seems to be my largest difficulty as a writer, I know where I want to go with the plot and I am in hurry to get their, but filling in the details is a definite problem that I see in my own work thus far. I want to make my stories as interesting to as many people as possible so I will continue to strive to do better.
Thanks for your input,
B.Z.
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crickette
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Sep 3, 2004 |
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I really enjoyed reading "Caroline's Committment. I am a hopeless romantic so this was right up my alley. I loved the overall attitude of the story. She always had a choice and you could tell that he begin to have genuine feelings for her that would preclude his non-monogomous habits. The story was well written and very easy to follow. Sortof like a Cinderella story with a twist. After all, they did live happily ever after
(7/10)
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- Replied by:
bcsollte
(Edit) (Sep 3, 2004)
- Crickette,
I am glad you liked Caroline's Commitment. I usually write stories with a heavier theme (Baker's Dozen), but you may also like When Harry Met Sally And Jill another story I wrote in a more consensual vein.
BZ
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zoomgal
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Jan 30, 2002 |
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A story that gets right to point. Descriptive detail of the bondage made it easy to imagine. It is worth reading. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
bcsollte
(Edit) (Jan 31, 2002)
- zoomgal
I'm glad you liked the story, Thank you.
BZ
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