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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Gordi
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Mar 21, 2009 |
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It's on par with your usual stuff. First half of the story is kinda useless, and the second half ends too abruptly.
A good writer doesn't tell, he shows. Really go into the pain and the torture. Drag it out a bit. I know I sound like a sicko, but if you're gonna write a story about sex and torture, I assume standard literary devices still apply. (6/10)
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