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Pig learns to serve
Author: Amy Hartdom
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(Added on Feb 28, 2009)
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Sara, a slut lesbian pig, learns her true role in life at that hands of a hot, sexy teenage girl. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
worzel
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Mar 13, 2009 |
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loved the story, it does get a bit over descriptive at times but I love the subject matter, not underage
girls, but the fact that what unfolds is the older is sub to the younger dom. My only criticism is personal preference, why paint the pig as such a pig? to my mind it's far more interesting to paint the sub as someone who (under the influence of the Dom)falls from grace and takes a fall, but hey it's a free world, you write what you want to write. I'll be here to read it! 9/10 (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
vampmaster
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Mar 1, 2009 |
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I guess this is a keeper. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mike uk reader
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Mar 1, 2009 |
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Amy Hartdom,On reading this your first contribution to the BDSM Library and this obviously only the first chapter, I simply had to congratulate now on producing a great turn on read for me. This extreme erotic story of lesbian domination is very very well written with much attention and skill in detail that had me in parts wishing I was a lesbian.
I hope there is more (dirty) chapters and extremities to cum soon. You made my day. Thanks. (10/10)
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a.broadsword
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Mar 1, 2009 |
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A tale of two halves,I abandoned reading it first time as I did not like the references to very young girls, for which the description had nor prepared me and the mass of irrelevant description, but later seeing someone rated it 9 I persevered and the latter half is great, but oddly lacking in description of the "Park" etc.
I look forward to the next installment. (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Mar 1, 2009 |
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Impressive start of what looks to be a promising tale. Story is a bit in the Brenda style, which I can appreciate largely.
Only slight 'negative' is maybe the rather harshness of Kimberly. I would have made her more of a smooth operator, more coaxing instead of bullying. But hey, that's me.
Well done Amy Hartdom.
JJ (9/10)
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