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Slave\'s Day Out
Author: jenni
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(Added on Feb 28, 2009)
(This month 16522 readers) (Total 21258 readers) |
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Master takes slave on a day trip, she wonders what\'s in store... |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 6, 2009 |
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Waited to review "Slave's Day Out" til more content was added.
What looked like a short, but promising start, continues in a positive vein in part two.
Although I have the feeling that the author either is very young, or hasn't got English as primary language, because of some irksome errors in spelling.
An excellent read, slightly hampered by the lack of paragraphs. On the other hand, the chapters are so short that chopping-up the content in smaller chunks isn't really needed.
Jenni seems to be an author that will grow with time and is as of now on my "to watch" list.
JJ (9/10)
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