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Don\'t be too attractive.....
Author: Valerie March
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(Added on Feb 28, 2009)
(This month 11729 readers) (Total 23864 readers) |
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The workings within a religious retreat catering exclusively for females and apparently devout, religious and caring. The actuality is a little different. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Grey_Slayer
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Mar 2, 2009 |
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Very enjoyable. Love the premise and look forward to seeing how this develops. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Mar 1, 2009 |
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Another promising start of what could become a nice story. Though I feel things are rushed a bit in this here first chapter.
I would have opted for a smoother transition of Mekis becoming entangled in Mother Superior's clutches.
Subtlety is always so much more rewarding for a reader, when getting to the 'tasty' bits.
JJ (8/10)
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