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Crossing a Line to Submission
Author: Martin Tawber
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(Added on Feb 14, 2009)
(This month 15588 readers) (Total 23952 readers) |
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a man decides that by overcoming hs fear of being fist-fucked, he will become a much better, more accommodating, fearless slave |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
BrazenBitch
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Feb 26, 2009 |
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Martin, this is top-notch writing. very hot. i'm a lesbian, but i love guy-on-guy BDSM stuff, and this is very well-done.
not sure why there are some strange characters in the story. hope you can get that cleaned up so it is not so distracting.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
martintawber
(Edit) (Feb 27, 2009)
- thank you. you are very kind. i'm glad you liked it. martin
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